Review of NOT QUITE DEAD YET by Holly Jackson

 2.5 Stars

After some heavy reads with complex themes, I decided to pick up some light reading. I chose this book because it has an interesting premise: someone solving her own murder.

Twenty-seven-year-old Jet Mason is violently attacked by an unseen intruder. She suffers a catastrophic head injury which her doctor tells her will trigger a deadly aneurysm within a week. Jet decides she wants to spend her remaining time solving her assault case which she knows will soon be upgraded to a murder case. She is assisted by her childhood friend, Billy Finney.

Unfortunately, from the beginning, I had difficulty suspending disbelief. Jet has major head trauma; the doctor tells her, “’you were comatose, had to be intubated. Suffered cardiac arrest from blood loss shortly after.” She had a fractured skull and had surgery and a lethal aneurysm looms, yet she leaves the hospital almost immediately after regaining consciousness. And the doctor’s only instruction is, “’Just change the dressings every day’”? Shortly afterwards, she starts slinging a sledgehammer. She starts losing feeling in various parts of her body, but she is able to physically exert herself in ways that would be daunting for someone healthy and fit?!

The other problem with Jet is her immaturity. She behaves like a bratty teenager rather than someone in her late twenties. She even runs away from home! She has no plan for her life. She’s always procrastinating, her favourite expression being, “’I’ll do it later.’” She blames others, like her dead sister and her demanding mother and her undemanding father, for her lack of accomplishments.

And then there’s Jet’s relationship with Billy. The entire thing seems so juvenile. Billy has had a crush on Jet since their childhood, but Jet doesn’t realize it? From the beginning, the author makes it so obvious that Billy is smitten. Does there have to be a romance element added? Can’t people just be friends?

The secondary characters tend to be one-dimensional. Virtually everyone is self-centred and unlikeable. Besides the person responsible for Jet’s attack, there’s at least one other murderer and an arsonist. One person should surely be charged with attempted murder and another should be charged with fraud. Women cheat or abandon families. Billy is one positive figure but the constant repetition of his need to help others becomes tedious.

Holly Jackson is best known as a YA author. Though this book is marketed as her first foray into adult fiction, my impression is that she continues to use the type of characterization and writing style that appeal to less sophisticated readers. The novel has an original premise, but its execution is unimaginative.