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Tuesday, June 2, 2020

Review of A THOUSAND MOONS by Sebastian Barry

4 Stars
I read Days Without End and enjoyed it very much, so was anxious to read this sequel.  Though not as masterful as the award-winning Days Without End, it is still a very satisfying read.

The narrator is Winona, the Lakota orphan girl who was rescued and adopted by Thomas McNulty and John Cole.  She lives with them in West Tennessee on a hardscrabble farm owned by Lige Magan, an old army buddy, and two freed slaves, Rosalee Bouguereau and her brother Tennyson.  Winona is beaten and raped, and though she has no clear memory of the event, she suspects that the perpetrator was Jas Joski, a store clerk who thinks of Winona as his fiancée.  A subsequent attack on Tennyson has Winona dressing as a young man and riding to a Confederate renegade camp to seek justice, “To do something to right things immediately.”  That trip changes Winona’s life even more.

The novel is set in the early 1870s.  Post-Civil War, defeated Confederates are agitating, stirring racial violence.  Farmers who lost their slave labour are especially resentful of freed blacks.  “In Tennessee . . . there were thousands of aggrieved souls . . . Men so disgruntled by the war they couldn’t breathe the air of peace, it choked them.”  Winona is a clerk for Briscoe, a kind and liberal-minded lawyer, who says, “’The time is so dangerous that the law is barely possible.’” 

Of course, the times are especially dangerous for Rosalee and Tennyson and for Winona.  Winona points out that she has less status than Rosalee:  “she was a slave before the war and a slave is low down in the eyes of white folks of course.  So I was lower than that.”  Even in the eyes of the law, she has no rights:  “There was no crime in hitting an Indian . . . Lige Magan went to the lawyer Briscoe . . . for affirmation of that and he affirmed it.”  Later, Briscoe says, “’An Indian ain’t a citizen and the law don’t apply’” as it would for a white person.

A major theme is the persecution and genocidal destruction of Native Americans.  Several times Winona refers to her not being considered human:  “in the minds of the townspeople I was not a human creature but a savage.  Closer to a wolf than a woman. . . . I was less than the least of them.   I was less than the whores in the whorehouse, except maybe for them I was just a whore, in the making.  I was less than the black flies that followed everyone in the summer.  Less than the old shit thrown to the backs of the houses.  Just something so less you could do what you wanted to it, bruise it, hit it, shoot it, skin it.”  Winona’s entire family was slaughtered:  “We were nothing so to kill us all was just the killing of nothing so it meant nothing.  It wasn’t a crime to kill an Indian because an Indian wasn’t anything.”   She ponders the consequences of people being considered less than nothing:  “I wonder what does it mean when another people judge you to be worth so little you were only to be killed?”  Winona speaks of the story of her people being “the saddest story that ever was on the earth. . . . That’s a weight of sadness has crushed many a head.  Ever seen a drunken Indian, ever seen an Indian in rags?  That’s what happens when a king is heaped with sadness.”

The book is very much a coming-of-age story.  Early on, Winona decides to take control of her life:  “There was a time for your father and mother to fight your battles . . . and there was a time to fight them for yourself and I had reached that time I reckoned.”  She realizes she must be brave, “to shuck off fear and have the courage of a thousand moons,” because “you have to meet the great force of the flood, or the tornado, or the great storm, with an equal great force.  To build up what has been torn down and to put back in their places what has been rended from their places and parted from their hooks.”  Near the end, at a pivotal moment, she resolves to “sort things out for myself” and tells her family, “’You the folks I attend to best in this world . . . but now I ask you to sit you down at that table and I will try and tell you what I am going to do.’”  She is fierce in her determination:  “I instructed them with my sternest voice they were to do nothing on my account.  They were to let me do for myself.”

The book is not flawless.  The relationship between Peg and Winona is problematic.  Peg is not sufficiently developed so one wonders why Winona loves her, and Winona seems unable to explain why she loves Peg.  Poetic phrasing does not help:  “If you could make honey hover in the air it would be Peg.  If you could take a sliver of the wildest river and make it a person it would be Peg.”  The author seems to want the reader to view their love as a parallel to Thomas and John’s (“Thou shalt hope to love like them”), but there is insufficient development of the former to make this credible. 

Another weakness is the ending.  It seems forced and rushed.  The identities of the guilty are revealed in one conversation?  Realistically, would such a conversation even take place?  And much of the suspense readers would feel about Winona’s fate is compromised by the fact that they are told at the beginning of the novel that Winona is speaking of events that transpired in the past:  “If I say that here following are the real events, you will remember that they are described at a great distance from the time of their happening.”

As usual with Barry’s fiction, the style is very lyrical.  For instance, Thomas has “the anger of the righteous angels.  He knew the absolute menace of the world.  He knew it was a place so knotted with evil that good could only hope to unknot a tiny few threads of it.”  John “was a shadow person – a place of shadows.  All as gentle as a child with me and all as fierce as a buffalo in battle.  John Cole, the keel of my boat.  Thomas the oars and the sails.”  Descriptions of nature are particularly poetic:  “A high cold sky was speckled with stray blues and greys like a bird’s egg.  But a reluctant sunlight was trying to measure the height of the sky with long thin veins.”

This is not really a standalone novel.  There are many references to events in Days Without End but much is not explained.  There is little character development as regards Thomas and John so they may seem flat and almost too good to be believable if a reader does not have fuller knowledge of them from the previous novel.  Since Days Without End is such a magnificent book, treat yourself and read it and then follow up with A Thousand Moons.

1 comment:

  1. I have just finished reading this sad but beautiful book. And yes, reading it as a sequel to End of Days. You are so right about the lyrical poetry of words - it’s what grabbed me from the get go.
    As for the ending I read it and re-read it several times. I was thrown by the use of the words ‘penitentiary yard’ I guess. Was Winona about to meet her fate? Then we were in her room at the farm. Was she there in spirit or not? It did seem rushed, yes. I re-read chapter one in case I’d missed something, but no. So greatly puzzled I put out the light and drifted off to sleep greatly puzzled…

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