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Friday, July 20, 2018

Review of OUR KIND OF CRUELTY by Araminta Hall

3 Stars
This psychological thriller begins with Mike Hayes stating that he is in prison after killing someone.  Then he takes us back into the past with the focus being on his relationship with Verity (whom Mike calls V).  They invented a sexual game which they called the Crave:  Mike and V would separate at a bar until some man took an interest in V; then at a signal from her, Mike would intervene, threatening violence.  The game ended when Mike and Verity, both sexually aroused by the game, would have sex. 

After several years together, Mike takes a temporary job in New York.  When he returns to London, V announces that she is getting married.  Mike is unable to accept that she is rejecting him; instead, he believes she is playing an extreme, extended version of Crave to punish him for a one-night stand, so he begins to follow her to determine what the next move is in the game.  He also doesn’t want to miss the signal when it is time for Mike to rescue her. 

Mike is the narrator; the entire novel is narrated in the first person from his point of view.  He is an unreliable narrator because as V told him when they first met, Mike is “’not very good at interpreting things.’”  It seems that Mike is misconstruing V’s behaviour but since her perspective is never given, one is left to wonder if V is indeed manipulating him.  There is also the problem that Mike has lapses in memory; these gaps often occur when he has been drinking too much or when he is stressed. 

Mike is in many ways a contradiction.  He is a successful banking executive who has come a long way from his impoverished childhood when he lived with an alcoholic mother and her string of abusive boyfriends.  He works well with numbers but he is emotionally stunted.  He thinks that by buying expensive Christmas gifts, he has done his duty to his foster family.  Mike lacks the ability to empathize.  It is chilling to read his comments about not caring “what happens to anyone apart from you and I [Verity].  I don’t wish death on others, but at the same time, there are so many pointless people out there, so many disposable lives.”  There is more than a touch of irony is his statement that V made him a better person:  “Because, before V, I was like my mother.  I didn’t care, I found it easy to shut down, I turned away and found it too easy to be cruel to others.” 

Mike also lacks the ability to read social cues though he has learned “enough lessons over the years to better understand what is and is not expected in life” so if he is invited for drinks after work, he knows “I should arrange my face into a smile and say yes.”  He admits to being dependent on V “because only she could make sense of the world for me.”

Occasionally there are touches of humour in Mike’s literalism.  The large house he buys has a drawing room though “I have no plans to become an artist.”  A work colleague tells him about having gone to an LBT meeting and Mike assumes she meant “some sort of exercise class as she was wearing Lyrca.”  A relative brags about V’s fiancé but Mike can’t interpret her tone and concludes, “She didn’t appear to like him much.”  But there is also sadness:  because Mike was holding a “tiny, battered red car” when he was removed from his childhood home, he concludes “it seems unlikely it could have meant anything much to me.”

What is difficult to believe is the extent of Mike’s delusions.  He is obviously intelligent but totally irrational when it comes to affairs of the heart.  He sees V’s engagement as a sign that “she had lost her mind with the distress I had caused her” or as an indication that she has begun another game of Crave!   He believes that he and V “are the only people ever to have felt the way we do.”  And he thinks “sometimes two people need each other so much it is worth sacrificing others to make sure they end up together.”  At one point he admits to having misunderstood a woman who tried to befriend him but he never makes the jump to realizing he could be misunderstanding V as well.  All he does understand is that without V, he will have a “deep, all-encompassing void in my soul” and thoughts of losing her leave him with “a feeling of inescapable terror.”  The reader will feel some sympathy for Mike because of his upbringing, but his behaviour is so obsessive and extreme that it stretches the reader’s credulity.

The book is not a difficult read though it is unsettling.  For me, its portrayal of Mike’s behaviour is too over the top to be believable.  The author, in the Acknowledgments, states that the book’s first draft was written in a “mad spurt” of “male-centered anger.”  I think this anger was not reined in sufficiently.

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