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Sunday, May 26, 2019

Review of AYESHA AT LAST by Uzma Jalaluddin

3.5 Stars
I was looking for a light read and settled on this novel which I had heard about as a retelling of Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice.  Though the book does not follow Austen’s plot slavishly, there are certainly many similarities.

The setting is the contemporary South East Asian Muslim community of suburban Toronto.  Elizabeth Bennett is Ayesha Shamsi, a 27-year-old unmarried substitute teacher who yearns to be a poet.  Mr. Darcy is Khalid Mirza, a conservative e-commerce project manager who has agreed to have his mother arrange his marriage:  “it is a truth universally acknowledged that a single Muslim man must be in want of a wife . . . [though to] his Indian mother, his own inclinations are of secondary importance.”  As expected, the two meet and are attracted to each other, but they repeatedly clash.  The ending, of course, is entirely predictable.

The character of Ayesha is appealing.  Her outspokenness is the trait that gets her into trouble.  Her first encounter with Farzana, Khalid’s mother, is hilarious as Ayesha asks the questions about Khalid that Farzana is asking of Hafsa, Ayesha’s cousin who is being considered as a possible wife for Khalid.  Ayesha shows herself to be the exact opposite of what Farzana wants in a daughter-in-law, someone without “’modern ideas about education and careers . . . [who shows] deference and modesty . . . [and is] quiet and refined . . . [and does not] talk back to her mother-in-law . . . [and spends] her days sewing, cooking and reading the Quran.’”

As in Austen’s classic, the characters change as they learn their flaws.  At first, Ayesha sees Khalid as “a judgmental conformist, content to bow mindlessly to tradition and the expectations of others.”  She calls him a “fundy” – a fundamentalist.  Naturally, she gradually becomes aware of her prejudices and becomes more accepting.  Khalid also learns that he tends to be judgmental and becomes more compassionate and open-minded. 

Many of the characters are rather one-dimensional.  Farzana is the controlling, conniving mother who seems to have no redeeming qualities.  Likewise, Sheila, Khalid’s Muslim-hating boss, is reminiscent of Miranda Priestly in The Devil Wears Prada.  Ayesha’s grandparents, on the other hand, are wise and good.  For instance, her grandfather quotes Shakespeare and her grandmother dispenses advice while giving cooking lessons:  “’A woman plays many roles in her life, and she must learn to accept them as they come.’” 

Actually, there are several people who give advice.  Ayesha’s best friend tells her, “’Sometimes the only way to move forward is to rock the boat.  Otherwise you risk losing everything.’”  Her principal warns her, “’Dreams tend to shatter if you’re carrying other people’s hopes around with you.’”  An imam advises Khalid to understand his motivations because “’Actions are judged by intentions, and everyone will have what they intended.’” 

I did have some issues with the book.  The number of times people ignore questions directly asked of them in conversation is annoying.  People don’t really do that in real life.  Also problematic is Ayesha’s loyalty to her shallow, materialistic, impulsive cousin; to justify this relationship, the author has Ayesha thinking, “The loyalty she felt for Hafsa was instinctive and unflinching and didn’t make a lot of sense.”  Khalid’s physical transformation at the end seems unnecessary.  There are also times when the book drags; I wanted the drama to end. 

Though not perfect, the book is mostly an enjoyable read.  Having Muslim Canadians as the main characters in a classic retelling not only shines a light on the lives of Muslims, as varied as are those of Christians, but also emphasizes the relevance of Jane Austen’s classic novel. 

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