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Wednesday, July 17, 2019

Review of THE GONE DEAD by Chanelle Benz

2.5 Stars
This book was a disappointment.  I was expecting a mystery with some focus on serious issues, but there is no real mystery, just people not wanting to discuss the past and confront racial injustice.

After an absence of three decades, Billie James returns to the Mississippi Delta.  She has inherited the house where her father Clifton, a well-known black poet, died in 1972, 30 years earlier.  During her time in Glendale, she finds out that some people suspect Clifton’s death may not have been the result of an accidental fall as determined by the police.  She decides to stay and try to learn the truth, though there are people who keep warning her not to ask too many questions.  As she persists, she finds herself in increasing danger.

The novel focuses on Billie’s perspective, but the viewpoints of eight others are interspersed.  The most interesting one is that of Avalon, “an old juke joint” frequented by Clifton.  After describing all it has seen in its life, which has included “too much weeping too damn much of the time,” it addresses Billie:  “Listen, girl, everything you want to know is near, telling itself over again, the song is on repeat.”

This statement really indicates the theme of the novel:  racism still exists.  People who know what happened to Clifton do not want to address the issue of unjust treatment of blacks in the past.  Even her Uncle Dee does not want her investigating his brother’s death.  In the present, Billie becomes friends with a white man but their relationship does not receive the community’s approval.  Given the high incarceration rate for blacks, Billie does not think she can trust the police.

The pace of the narrative is slow so I found my interest waning.  There is considerable extraneous information that seems to serve little purpose.  For instance, Uncle Dee brings Billie to talk to one of Clifton’s former girlfriends who says, “’Dee tells me you have been asking questions about your daddy’s death.’”  The following paragraph follows that statement:  “Her uncle is still hovering.  Her mother had a print of the Röttgen Pietà, a fourteenth-century German sculpture.  In it, a mutilated Christ lies emaciated in Mary’s lap, ribs showing, mouth fallen open, tiny compared to the mass of his mother.  But it is Mary’s stony expression that is so disturbing:  the wooden, embittered agony.  ‘She got the police report,’ her uncle says.”  What does a German sculpture have to do with the discussion of the police report of Clifton’s death?  What’s with the fixation with deodorant which is mentioned three times?  Her uncle comes to take her to a bar and Billie responds with “’What bar?  I don’t have deodorant on’”??  And how about this disjointed conversation:  “’My mother was an academic.  She specialized in Christian medieval theology.  So I know me some King James.’ She inspects her raw elbow.  ‘My cousin is in jail.  I hate thinking of him in there.  He was such a sweetheart’”??

The ending is disappointing.  There is no real closure since many questions are left unanswered.  One character, Dr. Melvin Hurley, an academic writing Clifton’s biography, is just dropped; he is present at the climax but then is never mentioned again.  The rushed climax and abrupt ending – with no dramatic revelations – are not in keeping with the pace of the rest of the novel. 

The most positive element of the novel is its rich sense of place.  There is no doubt that the author is familiar with the Mississippi Delta.  Unfortunately, I didn’t find much else to recommend the book.  There is no real mystery because the manner of Clifton’s death is totally predictable.  The theme is worth developing but its impact is lessened by an uneven, disjointed narrative.

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