2 Stars
Adam Price
learns from a young stranger that his wife lied to him about something
significant a couple of years earlier.
Adam confronts Corinne but before she can give him a complete
explanation, she vanishes. Adam sets out
to find her on his own, but soon other secrets about Corinne emerge and
eventually the police become involved.
The opening
certainly caught my attention. The
inciting incident (being told a secret kept hidden by a loved one) is
interesting, but shortly after that I started rolling my eyes at the improbable
events.
Adam is a
lawyer and so would have investigative resources at his disposal, but he
chooses to go solo. He does things he
would warn a client never to do. When
his wife goes missing, he doesn’t seem to be particularly worried and, though
he claims to know her so well, he accepts strange behaviour on her part as
natural? He lacks personality so it was
difficult to identify with him.
There are
other characterization issues. Corinne
we get to know only through Adam and through accusations made against her, so
the ending does not have the impact it should.
Adam and Corinne’s two sons, Ryan and Thomas, don’t behave
convincingly: their mother is missing
yet they just carry on as normal. Then
there are so many minor characters, none of whom is really developed, that it
is difficult to differentiate among them.
Then
there’s the plot. I expect plot twists,
but there are just too many coincidences.
So many people are simultaneously looking for one person, all for
different reasons? Johanna, a police
chief from Ohio, travels to New Jersey “on [her] own dime” to question
Adam. She leaves, but then is back at a
crucial moment to assist Adam? Actually,
she charges in more than once! And the
incident at the log cabin in Pennsylvania is just not believable.
Adam may
wish he had never met the stranger, and I too am left wishing I had not met The Stranger. Weak character development and improbable
events are not the elements of a good book.
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